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Topic1: Write an essay to compare – contrast two persons of your acquaintance.(comparision/ contrast essay)

02 Nov

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When I was a high school student, I have two best friends who have two cute names: Giang and Son. Giang and Son are twin bothers. They are very similar with appearances such as eyes, face, stature…Although I have been making friend with them for long time but I have the wrong Giang and Son. However, I have seen some important features which their personalities and dream are different.

The first difference between Giang and Son is personalities. Obviously, Giang is a good- humored and sociable person. He makes everyone like him by his way of talking that is courtesy and humor. For instance, when I talk to Giang, he always tells funny stories to make me smile. Giang is a social person so I can feel close when telling each other. He always helps everyone around him who faced to difficulties. On contrast, Son is a reticent and strict person. To illustrate, he is not close and friendly person so Son does not have many friends as Giang. Everyone feels unfamiliar and careful when telling him. Son, who hears too many, speaks to few. No one dare joke with him because of his strictness. Son, who always has profound thought, looks like old persons. People said that twin brothers are similar appearances but they are vastly different.

The second different feature between Giang and Son is dream.
Clearly, with two different personalities so Giang and Son also have different dreams. Giang likes having a normal life. For example, He thinks that studying university is not necessary so he did not go to the university. He enjoys painting and going everywhere, he likes so he opens himself a painting room. Unlike Giang, Son, having more many ambitious than Giang, wants to becomes a good engineer. He is always outstands all things when he was high school student. He tries his best to learn well and his dream became a truth.

The third different feature between Giang and Son is hobby. Obviously, Giang is a good- humored and sociable person so his way of wearing is comfortable to active easily in any situation. He likes wearing T-shirts and jean with sport shoes and watching comedy films and funny stories. Otherwise, Son is a reticent and strict person so his way of wearing is also different from Giang. He likes wearing T-shirt and western style pants with leather shoes so he still quite young but he looks like a serious person. He also likes watching documentary film and listening to romantic music.

In conclusion, although twin bothers is similar appearances, they are different from dream, personalities, and hobby. Therefore, his friends and family members can realize that a person has a different personality.

Outline

Introduction

Thesis:

However, I have seen some important features, which their personalities, dream, and hobby are different.

Body

Paragraph 1:

The first difference between Giang and Son is personalities.

–          Giang is a good- humored and sociable person

–          Giang is a social person so I can feel close when telling each other

–          On contrast, Son is a reticent and strict person.

–          He is not close and friendly person

Paragraph 2:

The second different feature between Giang and Son is dream.

–         Giang likes having a normal life

–         Son, having more many ambitious than Giang, wants to becomes a good engineer.

Paragaraph 3:

The third different feature between Giang and Son is hobby

–         Giang is a good- humored and sociable person so his way of wearing is comfortable to active easily in any situation.

–         Otherwise, Son is a reticent and strict person so his way of wearing is also different from Giang.

Conclusion:

Although twin bothers is similar appearances, they are different from dream, personalities, and hobby. Therefore, his friends and family members can realize that a person has a different personality.

 
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Posted by on November 2, 2011 in Academic Writing

 

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